Under the feet a dixdeux

jasmine bushes scatter fragrant petals
under the feet of monsoon queen, when she
treads earth.

The Dixdeux is:
1. written in any number of tercets. When written in more than one tercet, L3 becomes a refrain.
2. syllabic, with 10-10-2 syllables per line.
3. is unrhymed.
4. titled, unlike the haiku.

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4 comments

    1. she was never capricious here, in west Bengal but lately she is showing all the colours of that trait 🙂
      it rained so sweetly last night! the only tragedy was that my cats became cuckoo! there was a stormy wind blowing and felt just divine.

      1. they hate rain and they go crazy when it rains, and you can imagine the scene in a closed house! not too much! the monsoon rain usually is not accompanied with much thunder or lightning but other storms sometimes have a full show!

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