The Thursday Post Critiques 20.2.14

Ethereal Paints

the hut

He was born in darkness, bred there… she was a creature of light, born in a world full of light and innocence. It was a curse for her that their path crossed, without her knowledge, and he got his eyes fixated on her.

He knew he will never get her, as long as she lives in her world, so the illegal son of a witch and a demon decided he will wrench her away from her world. He unleashed a batallion of specters that defiled, corrupted everything that she had.

Soon she was out on the street, he salivating right behind her, but she just did not gave in. He got bored and moved on, started his life but never FORGAVE her for spurning him, and allowed his specters to exploit her if they can corrupt her.

They could not corrupt her, could not touch her soul, even though they…

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